Looking at her imperfect body in the mirror she was not quite satisfied,
But for her at that time it was just about right.
It was the first day of school;
She already read twice the important rules.
Wearing her best dress for the day,
she tried a new hairstyle,
She took a long time to decide which was her best profile .
Having a normal body she has a Normal life too,
She has no obligation and nothing to prove.
Reaching to the school she was ready for it ;
But little did she know she would be looked upon as a misfit.
And then the comments started,
The bullying made her fainthearted;
She was not ready for this,
The school was turned into a brutal abyss.
The body shaming was making her weak;
The Colours in her life were slowly turning bleak.
Was it anorexia or a weight obsession? she wasn’t sure.
But to fit in the society she had to be thin , there was no cure.
The happy girl was lost in the labyrinth of Body shaming,
She was dying but she thought it was just body taming.
They say your body is a temple, preserve it;
But maybe its just an amusement park so enjoy it.
Enjoy every ride of the park and
be proud of every stall,
Love all the blemishes whether big and small.
Be comfortable in your own skin,
Understand that everyone is not akin.
Show your flaws with pride;
Your body will reply with its own smiles.
Explore yourself like its a forest,
With beautiful trees and flowers that cannot be same,
Your body is not a circus lion it cannot be trained.
There’s no too fat and too skinny,
You gotta shun the ignominy.
Celebrate your uniqueness and imperfection;
Your body just needs you own affection.
~mehar malhotra
Sketch by ~ mehar.
Beautiful poem π
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Welcome π
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A bit clumsy to start off with, but the majority was very well written, liked the metaphors and play on some commonly used expressions. You more then made up for a weak start.
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Thank you for your views I’ll surely try to improve! ππ
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No it was 95% good don’t worry, just giving a little bit of constructive criticism, difficult to find any.
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Thank you! I really appreciate it! π
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I absolutely love this! Very powerful and very true.
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Thank you so much ! ππ
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Really powerful, thank you for sharing this.
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Thank you!ππ
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No problem, great post and happy you exposed this ππ
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So Nice Mehar ji.
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Thanx! π
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Welcome.
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Good one but the picture is imperfect with it no doubt its good but .. Somewhere you have loss your flaw but overall its quite good i appreciate you ππ
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The picture is based on the eating disorder anorexia, for which the root cause is body shaming (the topic of my blog) . thanx tho! π I appreciate your comments π
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Ok i dont know the biological thoughts sorry
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No need to be sorry! I appreciate your thoughts! π
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Awesome!! Your thoughts are quite noble!!π
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Thank you so muchπ
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